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__ Enthusiasm __ A class that I find to be enthusiastic about is weight lifting class. Lifting weights in the gym is really fun, a great way to stay in shape, and it’s a class in high school…so who wouldn’t want to take it, it’s an awesome class and beats taking notes in American history or math any day of the week! First off, weight lifting class is a raw class to be in because all you do while you’re in there…is work out. If you don’t like working out or exercising at all, trust me, you’ll change your mind after you give it a try. And besides, working out for like a whole hour and a half is way better than taking a test in English or doing long division, formulas, and homework in math class right? Weight lifting stomps all that, hands down. Anyone with a brain and touch of enthusiasm for doing something active, yet not boring or dull, can see that. Secondly, I find and feel weight lifting class to be enthusiastic because it’s a great way to stay in shape, OR GET IN SHAPE. I’m not self-conscious about myself because I get my complements and motivations from people towards my ego every now and then, but I care an enormous amount of what people think of me and how I look…so I tend to be active in exercise and going to the gym at least four days out of every week. Most people like __“looking good”__, some don’t, and there’s nothing wrong with that…but if you care about your weight, being healthy, and what people think about you physically, then weight lifting class is the way to go. There’s nothing wrong with working out, tightening up and looking good to boost your ego, I support it, but just don’t get too conceited now. Finally, weight lifting class stomps all other classes and is the class I’m most enthusiastic about because it’s a class in high school. What would you rather do, be stuck in __Math__ class for a whole hour and a half taking notes on equations and formulas, or be stuck in weight lifting class, in the gym, for a whole hour and a half pumping iron and feeling good about yourself…weight lifting right? It’s better than sitting down and taking notes for more than an hour, I’ll tell you that much. So yeah, it’s a good thing __us__ students in high school, or most high schools, have the chance to choose weight lifting as an elective. __In-conclusion__, I’m enthusiastic about weight lifting class because lifting weights in the gym is really fun, a great way to stay in shape, and it’s a class in high school.

DAVID: EXCELLENT JOB -- YOU NEED TO LET YOUR WEIGHTLIFTING TEACHER SEE THIS -- YOU CERTAINLY CAN RECRUIT STUDENTS. WONDER IF THEY WILL LET ME NOT TEACH ONE PERIOD AND COME DO WEIGHTLIFTING??SECOND PARAGRAPH -- WEIGHTLIFTING CLASS DOES NOT GET EXCITED. YOU ARE EXCITED ABOUT IT. COMPLIMENTS, NOT COMPLEMENTS. SEE IF YOU CAN FIGURE OUT UNDERLINED MISTAKES.